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~~WARNING!!! INSANELY SAD AND CHARACTER DEATH!!~~

Wind blowin' on my face
Sidewalk flyin' beneath my bike
A five year-old's first taste
Of what freedom's really like
He was runnin' right beside me
His hand holdin' on the seat
I took a deep breath and hollered
As I headed for the street


(name) was riding her bike, now age 5. Her daddy, Alfred, was holding onto the seat, keeping her balanced as he ran next to her. She smiled and yelled as she got to the street,

"You can let go now, Daddy!"
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It's still a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


And with that, he let go of the bike. She road by herself, smiling and cheering with her father.

I was standin' at the altar
Between the two loves of my life
To one I've been a daughter
To one I soon would be a wife
When the preacher asked,
‘Who gives this woman?'
Daddy's eyes filled up with tears
He kept holdin' tightly to my arm
‘Till I whispered in his ear


(Name) walked down the isle with her arm linked to her father, her soon-to-be husband Lukas smiling softly at her. As she stopped at the alter, the preacher asked, "Who gives this woman?"

Alfred's eyes filled with tears. He wasn't ready to give his daughter away. He held her arm tighter. She looked at him before whispering in his ear,

"You can let go now, Daddy."
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It still feels a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


With that he said, "I-i am," before handing her off to Lukas, smiling to himself sadly.

It was killin' me to see
The strongest man I ever knew
Wastin' away to nothin'
In that hospital room
‘You know he's only hangin' on for you'
That's what the night nurse said
My voice and heart were breakin'
As I crawled up in his bed, and said


(Name) walked into the hospital, alone at night. She walked up to the check in counter and said, "(Name) Jones for Alfred."

The woman nodded sadly and said, "Follow me."

(Name) followed her to his room. The nurse said before entering, "You know he's only holding on you."

(Name) nodded sadly. She walked in and saw the state of her dad. He was hooked up to an IV monitor, it beeping every few seconds. She felt her heart break as she crawled in next to him. He smiled weakly at her, "H-hey (Name)"

"H-hey Dad," she replied, her voice cracking.

"I-I don't w-want to leave you," he said, his breath slowing.

She held his cheek before saying, a tear slipping out of her eye,

"You can let go now, Daddy
You can let go
Your little girl is ready
To do this on my own
It's gonna be a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go"


With that, his breath stopped and the beeping became a flat line.

"You can let go"

(I was just in the mood to write something sad)
This made me cry to write.

I do not own the song. It belongs to Crystal Shawanda
I do not own America. He belongs to Hetalia.
I do not own Hetalia. It belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.
I do not own you. You belong to yourself. Or maybe Mother Russia.
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Dawsonsauce Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
SADDEST STORY EVAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Waaaah! No, I disagree! rainbow cry Cry forever Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Crying Mako crying :crying: rvmp SpongeBob (Cries) [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon Jake crying plz Fool Emoji-37 (Waving and Crying) [V3] :cry: +SeungRi (Emoticon) cries Sparta Emoji-02 (Cries) Crying Rose cry NOOOO sobbing - crying 
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs tightly*
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Dawsonsauce Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015
WHY AMERICA WHY!!! WHY DO YOU LEAVE SO SADLY!!!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!!!!!!!! *hides in a box*
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Dawsonsauce Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015
i'm not mad at you it's just sad :'(
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sowwy...
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Dawsonsauce Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
it's alright, ok I think I got it, I stopped crying, oh ok now I think i'm g-  rainbow cry!!!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*screams, getting a bucket to collect the rainbow tears*
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RaSkylar Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Crap I'm crying now
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
WAHH I'm sorry sweetie!! *hands tissues*
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RaSkylar Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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ImAwakeAndAlive Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I decided to listen to this song after reading this.  I was trying not to cry.  The Olive Garden commercial took away the mood.
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
XD OLIVE GARDEN HOW DARE YOU

I love this song though, it's so beautiful
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MapleCanadianSyrup Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this song so when I was half way through I was like " IT'S GONNA HAPPEN SOON ITS COMING UP I CAN'T I CAN'T" *sighs* I did. *cries* amazing job.
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! and yeah anyone who's heard the song knows it's gonna come XD
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michelthekiler2 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
i hand to bit my lip until it was bleeding for me not to cry but  it didn't work and now my lip is bleeding..................GREAT!!!!


anyways i loved the story, i cried and i am not a person you can make cry easily GOOD JOB~!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thank you love and I'm sorry for your lip!
I was thinking about rewriting this since it's been a while since I've written anything for Hetalia
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DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
WELL TRY NOT TO GET ON THE MOOD AGAIN PLEASE
((even though I loved this story alot. :'( ))
*faceplants onto pillow and cries*
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs tightly* I'm sowwy!!!
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
WAAAAHHHHH!! NOOO ALFIE!!
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JazzyLick Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
//whispers// also Norway <3
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TinySilverQuills Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Mustn't...cry..must..be..OH FORGET IT!...WAHHHHH ALFIE NOOOOOO T-T!!
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lilc12354 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I'm crying so bad right now.... great story!
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and I'm sowwy
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
why did you do this to meee
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sowwy ;-;
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's such a good fix but I cry too easily ;-;
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ArsenicGallows Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bring me to tears why don't ya. Great story though :)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and I'm sorry...
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hetaliabadgirl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
You hear that sound?

Thats me crying at how absolutely beautiful this story is...
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww!! Thank you >u<
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jazzylmao Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice story by the way ;u;
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Arigato
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jazzylmao Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The tears are pouring out ;-;
This song reminded me of the one i danced with my dad on my 15 birthday
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw cute ^^
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LivinLikeLindsey Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Artist
:'D Sad but I still love it.
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Arigato!
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LivinLikeLindsey Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Artist
:D
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gamergurl7755 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Very well done ;-; bravo 
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student General Artist
*is crying* this was wonderful
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank yoU!
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Da you're welcome
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kiyorihiroshi1234 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
i cried reading this! it reminds me of my character when he had to let go of his friends-

oh why am i explaining that? -clicks the fav button-

good story bro!(sis)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry for making you cry!
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kiyorihiroshi1234 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
no its oky i was just touched -smiling-
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xreaderfan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014

that was a really sad story, I cried when I read itDeath Crying 


Nice work by the way

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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and I'm sorry for making you cry!
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
That last part... My heart is broken... Why are sad stories always attracted to me?
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD I don't know *hugs* I'm sorry I broke your heart
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