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~~WARNING!!! INSANELY SAD AND CHARACTER DEATH!!~~

Wind blowin' on my face
Sidewalk flyin' beneath my bike
A five year-old's first taste
Of what freedom's really like
He was runnin' right beside me
His hand holdin' on the seat
I took a deep breath and hollered
As I headed for the street


(name) was riding her bike, now age 5. Her daddy, Alfred, was holding onto the seat, keeping her balanced as he ran next to her. She smiled and yelled as she got to the street,

"You can let go now, Daddy!"
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It's still a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


And with that, he let go of the bike. She road by herself, smiling and cheering with her father.

I was standin' at the altar
Between the two loves of my life
To one I've been a daughter
To one I soon would be a wife
When the preacher asked,
‘Who gives this woman?'
Daddy's eyes filled up with tears
He kept holdin' tightly to my arm
‘Till I whispered in his ear


(Name) walked down the isle with her arm linked to her father, her soon-to-be husband Lukas smiling softly at her. As she stopped at the alter, the preacher asked, "Who gives this woman?"

Alfred's eyes filled with tears. He wasn't ready to give his daughter away. He held her arm tighter. She looked at him before whispering in his ear,

"You can let go now, Daddy."
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It still feels a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


With that he said, "I-i am," before handing her off to Lukas, smiling to himself sadly.

It was killin' me to see
The strongest man I ever knew
Wastin' away to nothin'
In that hospital room
‘You know he's only hangin' on for you'
That's what the night nurse said
My voice and heart were breakin'
As I crawled up in his bed, and said


(Name) walked into the hospital, alone at night. She walked up to the check in counter and said, "(Name) Jones for Alfred."

The woman nodded sadly and said, "Follow me."

(Name) followed her to his room. The nurse said before entering, "You know he's only holding on you."

(Name) nodded sadly. She walked in and saw the state of her dad. He was hooked up to an IV monitor, it beeping every few seconds. She felt her heart break as she crawled in next to him. He smiled weakly at her, "H-hey (Name)"

"H-hey Dad," she replied, her voice cracking.

"I-I don't w-want to leave you," he said, his breath slowing.

She held his cheek before saying, a tear slipping out of her eye,

"You can let go now, Daddy
You can let go
Your little girl is ready
To do this on my own
It's gonna be a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go"


With that, his breath stopped and the beeping became a flat line.

"You can let go"

(I was just in the mood to write something sad)
This made me cry to write.

I do not own the song. It belongs to Crystal Shawanda
I do not own America. He belongs to Hetalia.
I do not own Hetalia. It belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.
I do not own you. You belong to yourself. Or maybe Mother Russia.
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
WAAAAHHHHH!! NOOO ALFIE!!
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JazzyLick Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
//whispers// also Norway <3
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TinySilverQuills Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  New member
Mustn't...cry..must..be..OH FORGET IT!...WAHHHHH ALFIE NOOOOOO T-T!!
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lilc12354 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I'm crying so bad right now.... great story!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and I'm sowwy
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
why did you do this to meee
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sowwy ;-;
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's such a good fix but I cry too easily ;-;
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ArsenicGallows Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Bring me to tears why don't ya. Great story though :)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and I'm sorry...
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