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~~WARNING!!! INSANELY SAD AND CHARACTER DEATH!!~~

Wind blowin' on my face
Sidewalk flyin' beneath my bike
A five year-old's first taste
Of what freedom's really like
He was runnin' right beside me
His hand holdin' on the seat
I took a deep breath and hollered
As I headed for the street


(name) was riding her bike, now age 5. Her daddy, Alfred, was holding onto the seat, keeping her balanced as he ran next to her. She smiled and yelled as she got to the street,

"You can let go now, Daddy!"
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It's still a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


And with that, he let go of the bike. She road by herself, smiling and cheering with her father.

I was standin' at the altar
Between the two loves of my life
To one I've been a daughter
To one I soon would be a wife
When the preacher asked,
‘Who gives this woman?'
Daddy's eyes filled up with tears
He kept holdin' tightly to my arm
‘Till I whispered in his ear


(Name) walked down the isle with her arm linked to her father, her soon-to-be husband Lukas smiling softly at her. As she stopped at the alter, the preacher asked, "Who gives this woman?"

Alfred's eyes filled with tears. He wasn't ready to give his daughter away. He held her arm tighter. She looked at him before whispering in his ear,

"You can let go now, Daddy."
You can let go
Oh, I think I'm ready
To do this on my own
It still feels a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go


With that he said, "I-i am," before handing her off to Lukas, smiling to himself sadly.

It was killin' me to see
The strongest man I ever knew
Wastin' away to nothin'
In that hospital room
‘You know he's only hangin' on for you'
That's what the night nurse said
My voice and heart were breakin'
As I crawled up in his bed, and said


(Name) walked into the hospital, alone at night. She walked up to the check in counter and said, "(Name) Jones for Alfred."

The woman nodded sadly and said, "Follow me."

(Name) followed her to his room. The nurse said before entering, "You know he's only holding on you."

(Name) nodded sadly. She walked in and saw the state of her dad. He was hooked up to an IV monitor, it beeping every few seconds. She felt her heart break as she crawled in next to him. He smiled weakly at her, "H-hey (Name)"

"H-hey Dad," she replied, her voice cracking.

"I-I don't w-want to leave you," he said, his breath slowing.

She held his cheek before saying, a tear slipping out of her eye,

"You can let go now, Daddy
You can let go
Your little girl is ready
To do this on my own
It's gonna be a little bit scary
But I want you to know
I'll be ok now, Daddy
You can let go"


With that, his breath stopped and the beeping became a flat line.

"You can let go"

(I was just in the mood to write something sad)
This made me cry to write.

I do not own the song. It belongs to Crystal Shawanda
I do not own America. He belongs to Hetalia.
I do not own Hetalia. It belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.
I do not own you. You belong to yourself. Or maybe Mother Russia.
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DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
WELL TRY NOT TO GET ON THE MOOD AGAIN PLEASE
((even though I loved this story alot. :'( ))
*faceplants onto pillow and cries*
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs tightly* I'm sowwy!!!
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kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
WAAAAHHHHH!! NOOO ALFIE!!
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JazzyLick Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
//whispers// also Norway <3
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TinySilverQuills Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Mustn't...cry..must..be..OH FORGET IT!...WAHHHHH ALFIE NOOOOOO T-T!!
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lilc12354 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I'm crying so bad right now.... great story!
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and I'm sowwy
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
why did you do this to meee
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sowwy ;-;
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Muchiroco Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's such a good fix but I cry too easily ;-;
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ArsenicGallows Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bring me to tears why don't ya. Great story though :)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and I'm sorry...
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hetaliabadgirl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
You hear that sound?

Thats me crying at how absolutely beautiful this story is...
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww!! Thank you >u<
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jazzylmao Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice story by the way ;u;
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:iconpandaday12:
pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Arigato
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jazzylmao Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The tears are pouring out ;-;
This song reminded me of the one i danced with my dad on my 15 birthday
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw cute ^^
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LivinLikeLindsey Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Artist
:'D Sad but I still love it.
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Arigato!
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LivinLikeLindsey Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Artist
:D
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gamergurl7755 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Very well done ;-; bravo 
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student General Artist
*is crying* this was wonderful
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank yoU!
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Da you're welcome
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kiyorihiroshi1234 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
i cried reading this! it reminds me of my character when he had to let go of his friends-

oh why am i explaining that? -clicks the fav button-

good story bro!(sis)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry for making you cry!
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kiyorihiroshi1234 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
no its oky i was just touched -smiling-
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xreaderfan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014

that was a really sad story, I cried when I read itDeath Crying 


Nice work by the way

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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and I'm sorry for making you cry!
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
That last part... My heart is broken... Why are sad stories always attracted to me?
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD I don't know *hugs* I'm sorry I broke your heart
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
It's fine... I always have my feels everywhere.
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Here have some of mine *hands you jar labeled feels*
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! *collects my feels and stores them in jar* there! That should hold it! Until they run again...
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Just keep them in the fridge!
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
Okay! I'll keep good care of them. 
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay! ^^
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NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I started to cry at the first sentence. This is truly a wonderful yet sad story. Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 

(I had a hard time typing this cause of the tears)
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry for making you cry! *hugs tightly* I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
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NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
*hugs back* It's fine and I did enjoy it. Your story is beautiful. It's just that when I hear that song I think of when I have to go through the end of that song with my dad. I don't want to go through with it and I know no one does.
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
For me, I think it's just even getting to the second verse. (Trying to be funny.... failing horribly)
My dad is really important to me. He's hilarious (he does the raise the roof dance in the car randomly XD), he's a great cook (his chili- to die for), and he loves me for being me. My mom tries to change me a lot, forcing me out of the house and forcing me to cotillion, but my dad likes me the way I am. He likes my anime obsession. He's even trying to get Naruto on DVD so we can watch it together.
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NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
My dad is the same with me. He's one of the few people who understands me. My dad has 3 daughters (me and my 2 younger half sisters). I'm the only one who will go see him on the weekends and isn't a screw up (both of my sisters are druggies and both have almost gotten pregnant and they like 16 and 17). My sisters stopped going to see him a few years ago and started getting into trouble. My dad looked me in the eye and told me that I was his favorite daughter (though I do know he still loves the other 2 just as much as he does me). He's told me numerous times that he's so proud that I'm in college and every once in a while I'll get a text from him saying how much he loves me and that he's proud of me. I love my dad to death and i wouldn't ask for anyone else.

*looks at comment* Wow. I didn't mean to put all of that. Anyways, I'm like the younger female version of my dad. :D (Big Grin)     
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You seem like you have a great relationship with your father. I'm still young (actually just entering freshmen year after the summer..... God, I'm a perv if I just look at my profile TT~TT) and my dad is by far my favorite parent. He listens to me and if I get in trouble (like forget homework or something), he just signs the slip i get and tells me to not do it again. I love my dad and I don't want anything to happen to him....

You probably know Obama Care, yes? Well, if it goes into action, since my dad's a doctor I will barely see him. He works so hard enough, just adding it will result in me barely seeing him ever again. I don't know if you're against it or for it, but I am against Obama care just because of my father's presence in my home.
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NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I don't really pay attention to Obama. I'm not big on political stuff. I hope it doesn't go into action now so you can spend more time with your dad.   
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pandaday12 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. My friends, well ex-friends, yelled at me for it and now I only have one friend who would benefit from Obama Care who actually is nice to me.
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1StarTwinkle Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
Oh...Oh...Oh...I heard this song long ago and I cried about it, when I saw this title I didn't even have to read it to get tears in my eyes and just actually reading it made it worse.
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musickrazy123 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student General Artist
same here :iconcryforeverplz:
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PurpleAsteroid Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
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